This is some feedback we got for the rough cut 14 from our teacher. If these are done, then the next one should be the final cut.
1.16 the fist seems a bit too much, try to layer with something else where he is not singing
1.20 try and put the cream fight in slow-mo and keep the pool shot layered until 1.26
1.35 reverse the shot of the singer jumping and the singer running
1.44 cross-cut the shot of the layered guitarist